One Fine Day and Script Feedback

So I looked through all the One Fine Day assessments, both of each other and the self-assessments. You folks are really sharp and have good eyes about each other's work. I think there may be some personal skewing as far as your own work goes. It can be easy to be your own worst critic, while at the same time overlooking issues that other people are more likely to see. I'll leave the reviews in a box in the main office on the 6th floor for you to pick up along with my own graded review, that way you can see the feedback others gave you.

I still need to grade the work on the wall, however, but this will happen before next Tuesday certainly.

I also looked through your scripts and added notes and comments, these I will leave out for you to pick up as well. Since you need to get going on this, and hopefully you already are, I'll set these out tomorrow. I will label the pile for pick-up in the main office (6th floor) but you can also ask Velma, the department secretary if you don't see them.

Overall, good work and good ideas, I think the set of proposed stories could be awesome illustrated pieces. Some few of you still need to pin down the plotted sequence of events. The next step is to do your visual research. What look are you going for? What settings? What time period? What is the character design? Try as many different ideas as possible, brainstorm this stuff and don't settle on anything too soon.

Stay tuned and good luck.